Change in idea?

Thinking about my idea I have began to see flaus in my opening to min clip. For instance it will be hard to include both a fight scene and a chace scene within a 2 min clip. Also assassin's don't tend to be confrunted in hand to hand combat.

After seeing the flaus I have decided to rethink my idea.

My change in idea is a complete change in what I want to include, but I can't decied which idea to use between my two new ones.




1.
2 people sitting in a park watching the scenery having a convosation about birds. They talk for a while about the birds and how they are free. The convosation changes to the human sences and how they can be easily decieved. One man points towards a tree and continues to talk, the other man looks over where he is pointing but when he looks back the man is gone, the camera pans to reviel the man standing behind the man then he breaks the man sitting downs neck. Continuing to talk to the now dead body he sits back down next to it. Then pulling out his phone he rings someone. We then cut to see a phone in a dark room ringing and someone pick it up, cut we to a extreme close up of the persons mouth as he awnsers and talks to the assassin. Never revealing who this man is.




2.
A man standing against a tree with a person behind him bound and mouth gaged. The man is looking around to make sure that no one is in the area. After seeing that everything is clear he walks over to his prisoner and begins to talk to them as if to taunt them. He talks about how he is the cat and the prisoner is the mouse and that it was just a matter of time till he was caught. The man then turns to face away from the prisoner for a few seconds then turns back. The prisoner is gone and the rope and mouth gag is on the floor. Looking around in panic the man pulls out a gun ready to defend himself. After looking around for a few seconds the man begins to walk towards the exit, hoping that he is in the clear. When he hears something hit the ground behind him, turning rapidly gun in hand pointing, ready to shoot. But no one is there, suddenly the prisoner appeard behind him, in a swift movement grabs the gun so he is unable to shoot and breaks his neck. he then drags the body over to a opening in a bush. Once placing the body in the bush he pulls out the phone from the dead body, cut to a phone ringing in a room, the phone is picked up, we see the mans mouth but nothing else as he says 'Is it done?' We cut back to the prisoner who replys 'Yes, now let them go.' Cut back to the man who says 'You still have some jobs to do.' Then hangs up. Not revealing who he is.