From looking at my final piece of work from creating our opening two mins I have noticed that there are many things wrong with it. This will bring me down in marks for my final grade, which is something I do not want to happen. This means that I have two options, I can either focus purely on my Research and Planning or I can re-film my piece.
So far I am leaning more towards the option of re-filming. But also from watching my piece I have grown away from the idea that I had, this means that I will most probably be changing the idea of which I am filming. I do not find this a problem as I have been thinking about possible ideas that I feel are better and I can work with more.
The idea is that the audience will see a person (Main Character - MC) walking down a street dressed in normal attire, narration will be heard over the clips that you see, he will turn down an ally but stop as he has a feeling that he is being watched. 'camera will look around the corner at him but as he turns to see the camera it will duck and hide behind the wall'. As he then turns to continue walking down the ally he will see that there is now a man standing in his way a few meters away blocking his path (Bad Guy 1), 'with the main character facing the camera over should shot to reveal that there is also someone now standing behind his a few meters away blocking his escape route (Bad Guy 2)'. Realising what is about to happen MC will take off his jacket and place it on the floor next to him, standing up looking at Bad Guy 1, both Bad Guys will nod at each other signalling that they are about to attack. Bad Guy 2 makes the first move, running forwards to MC, MC will counter by turning and elbowing Bad Guy 2 in the head, knocking him into the wall (Fight scene). Once killing Bad Guy 2 by breaking his neck MC will look at the body, pick up and put on his jacket and move over to the still dazed Bad Guy 1 on the floor, move behind him, pick up his head and begin to strangle him, while covering his mouth, till he is dead. MC will then get up shrug off what just happened and continue to walk off down the ally. Cut to title screen.
If I was to re-film my final piece then this will be the idea that I will go with.
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